2007年10月26日金曜日

My favorite place

My favorite places
There are a lot of my favorite places. I intend to introduce a place healing fatigue. It is Nagasaki and Aso and my room to introduce. These are my favorite places. Then I introduce it.

Nagasaki
My favorite place is Nagasaki. There are many sightseeing spot. But, my favorite spot is Inasayama. There is Nagasaki city. It spot is very famous. We can very beautiful Nagasaki city night view at there. We ride ropeway or drive at the mountain. Then, mount top has very good restaurant. In winter, night view is very beautiful.
Second, my favorite place is Grover garden. There have many flowers. Then, flower changed every season. It is very beautiful. In spring is tulip, in summer is sunflower and in fall and winter are red leaves. There is famous spot at school excursion. School student take many pictures at there. Every season changed flower is entertained by us.

My hometown is Aso
Aso is very nice place. I like Aso all the time for 20 years because I do not leave Aso. Because I am in Aso since I was born, I don’t understand a good point of much Aso. But it is registered with a world heritage and is proud now. There is the favorite family and feels thankful. Because everybody says the place where Aso is good, I am glad.
Because there are a lot of tourist attractions, there is the person of various countries. The farm land is in particular popular with not only the Japanese but also foreigners. Hot spring and the Mt. Aso mountain climbing are popular, too. However, it is very cold in winter. Because air is clean, water and rice and vegetables are delicious. 

In my room
I began two livings with a younger brother from spring. I was already used first though I was very lonely. A friend comes to play and, to see television, can be relaxed. Because I can make myself at home though I am smaller than the parents' house, I like it. I do housework, and it is hard. When it is troublesome, there is it. Because there is a lot of one's time, I do not want to waste it.
It is a room same as a younger sister at the parents' house. Because it is double occupancy, it is wide. I quarrel, and there is it when I want one time. But I hear music to see television together and am happy because I can teach study. When I sleep, I talk about the event in the school. I talk about troubles well. When I returned from the school to the house, I can be relaxed. I can feel relieved when I watch the face of the family.

Conclusion
My favorite place is all. Nagasaki is nice place, Aso is very relax place and in my room is important. The favorite place is going to heal everyday fatigue. I wanted to go to there. I want to go to the favorite place of all. And I think that I want a lot of people to come for Aso. Then, I look for more favorite places.

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1 件のコメント:

Paul Beaufait さんのコメント...

Hello, Shoko!

Can you think of a catchy, yet comprehensive title that will attract readers to your essay, and give them a taste of the kind(-s) of places it's about before they start reading?

Cheers.