2008年1月15日火曜日

Hair salon

January 10.
I went to hair salon with Namu and Tomomi.
We went to hurry.
15words

Australia

January 10. A younger brother goes to Australia by a school excursion for one week from tomorrow. So he came back in Aso from today. I ordered a souvenir. While there isn't a younger brother, I am glad because it is only in my house.
45words

French

January 9. I remembered that tomorrow's French report. Because it was very difficult, I didn't want to study French. However, I did my best because it was the last class.
30words

Dinner

January 9. I had take me and the younger brother to the cousin with dinner. The meal with 3 felt strange. However, the story was interesting, too.
27words

Nail

January 8. A school was finished I went to make a nail tip. I was uneasy whether I was in time by a coming-of-age ceremony. However, salesclerk was all right, I was very happy.
34words

Oh.....

January 8. I was a school from 1 period today. However, I got up at 11:00. I didn't notice an alarm having sounded either. I was surprised to watch a clock. However, I didn't understand I was too eager and what should have done. But 5 period was test,I went to from 4 period.
55words

Study

January 7. I tried some study hard, because it's a test tomorrow. I wasn't so sleepy to miss it. I was up until 4:00.
24words

Angry...

January 7. I returned to the house and was angry. The younger brother was a winter vacation until today. However, a lot of friends came when I returned to the house. Though I was tired and returned, there was not rice. I was angry to contact it when a friend came because there wasn't communication.
55words

A school began

January 7. A school began on today. I met everybody after a long absence. I talked a lot for joy. There was the friend whom a coming-of-age ceremony ended in inside. I want to almost try a test hard because it is a spring vacation.
45words

Cleaning

January 6. I cleaned the house today because it was very fine.
And I went to buy a cooking ingredient.
I want to try cooking hard this year.
28words

Sleepy...

January 5. I was very sleepy today. I played and may have been tired. Because life rhythm collapsed in New Year holidays, I want to regain physical condition management well.
30words

2008年1月9日水曜日

Portfolio

Student ID: 06232
(last five digits of
your student no.)






Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)






0.0. Overview






Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)





























































































































































































































































































Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews 0
0
0
0
18
0
18


Blog posts 0
0
0
0
0
0
0


Words 0
0
0
0
757
0
757


TOTAL
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1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)















































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































1.1. Showcase





Short
titles





[+ links]
Dates
(yy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Notes
Mega-
essay
07.10.12





Mega Essay

07.10.17
0
922
0
0
0
0
0
Favorite
place(-s)
07.10.26





My favorite place

07.10.26
0
525
1
0
0
0
0
Movie
review
07.11.11





Toy Story

07.11.10
0
490
0
0
1
0
0
Community
life
07.11.25





Community life

07.11.24
0
382
2
0
0
0
0
TV in
Japan
07.12.09





TV program

07.12.07
0
320
0
0
0
0
0
Learning w/
computers
07.12.21





Learning with Computer

07.12.21
0
766
0
0
0
0
0




















Totals---
---
0
3405
3
0
1
0
---

Key:





¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length





W: number of words





C: number of comments





L: number of links





P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included





1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.









  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]






2.0. Comments





























































































































































































































































































































































































Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
Busy summer vacation

07.09.26

18

1
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*



2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
"Nabe"

07.11.21

21

1
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*

Community life

07.12.05
34

2
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
---

---
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
---
---


10
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*




2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
---

07.09.26
---
---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
---

10





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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.






2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?










  • ...





2.6. Additional reflections on comments











  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]






3.0. Typing Speed Trials

















































































































Showcase
Numbers of words
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*

14 words

07.12.12
3.2. Best typing speed trial*

131 words

07.11.21
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)

131 words
---
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials**
131 words

07.11.21



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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.






4.0. Book Reviews





























































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































4.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01
Book review 2-01: TINKERS ISLAND
07.12.04
42
0
2-02
Book review 2-02: FOOD AND DRINK IN BRITAIN
07.12.04
58
0
2-03
Book review 2-03: Australia
07.12.04
61
0
2-04
Book review 2-04: THE RANSOM OF RED CHIEF
07.12.04
43
0
2-05

Book review 2-05: FLIGHT
07.12.04
37
0
2-06
Book review 2-06: Dagerous Game
07.12.04
71
0
2-07

Book review 2-07: COUNTDOWN TO MIDNIGHT
07.12.04
21
0
2-08
Book review 2-08: THE HOUSE OF THE SEVEN GABLES
07.12.04
29
0
2-09

Book review 2-09: NELSON MANDELA
07.12.04
42
0
2-10

Book review 2-10: SCOTLAND
07.12.04
43
0
2-11

Book review 2-11: READING COMPREHENSION 3
07.12.04
18
0
2-12

Book review 2-12: The Climb
07.12.04
25
0
2-13
Book review 2-13: Julie Chan is MISSING
07.12.04
44
0
2-14
Book review 2-14: THE SINGER NOT THE SONG
07.12.04
23
0
2-15
Book review 2-15: CLARA
07.12.04
39
0
2-16
Book review 2-16: Mission Apollo
07.12.19
75
0
2-17

Book review 2-17: The Olympic Games
07.12.19
54
0
2-18
Book review 2-18: THE CINEMA
07.12.19
32
0




0





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TOTALS:
757
0
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).






4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.










  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]






5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media












































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































Showcase
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?

○

5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
○

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
○

5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?


×
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?
○

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
---










  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)

○











  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")

○











  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)

○











  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)

×











  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)

○

5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
○











  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?










    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts
---
---










  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.










    • www (n)





    • xxx (m)





    • yyy (o)





    • zzz (p)





    • ...
---
---
5.3. Links & media---
---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?
○











  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?

○











  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?










    • ___ posts including pictures or other graphics
---
---
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
○











  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*










    • ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
---
---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?

×










  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?










    • ___ posts including other media
---
---










  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:










    1. ...





    2. ...





    3. ...

---

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5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.










  1. ...





  2. ...





  3. ...






6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing











  • ...






7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors











  • ...

____________________
Notes:










  1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.





  2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.





  3. This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
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2008年1月8日火曜日

Mister Donut

January 5. I went to Mister Donut with a friend today. Because I loved Mister Donut, I was glad. It was 100 yen at a sale. However, it was it to 0 points because a period expired though I accumulated it of 320 points. I was very disappointed.
48words

2008年1月7日月曜日

In Hikarino-mori

January 4. I went to shopping with a younger sister and a mother in Hikarino- mori. There were very many shoppers. Many things were very cheap at a sale. I was given perfume and a false eyelash by a mother. I was very glad.
43words